She sat calmly on a flat stone surrounded by sparse patches of grass. The rocky soil gave little nourishment to the gold speckled grass. The murky, gray sky looomed above her, starting to drop little icy orbs of water, splattering on her red face. The smell of salt water flooded her senses as she took in the veiw around her. Bright green bushes tainted with dark purple and trees enclosed the small opening. The trees towered above her in an almost foreboding manner, yet, they never stopped her. She peered down to the dark depths below. the waves crashing up against the already wet rocks seemed to be football fields away, but lay directly beneath her.

                                                                                                                  ----R.D.

I thought this person did a fantastic job describing. i like the line "The murky, gray sky loomed above her, starting to drop little icy orbs of water..."

He wandered through the green, moist, slimy trees that seemed to be widening in a smile. The rain poured down in humidity. He was soaking wet, and his bag was drenched. Twisted, tangled, mangy vines were smothered in slime. They were slippery as he grabbed on to one. Feet stomping, the bugs were cowaring away in their holes. Creepy, crawly little creatures scattered as he slipped and fell in the mud.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     ---A.I.

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